i loved it.. best one i've seen today
(only thing is that it was a bit odd when the music just cutted off when he got his wings and catches her.. i though my speakers died for second lol.. but yeah.. maybe try to fade out instead of a sudden stop.. and maybe give it another song instead of having silence.. because silence is rarely good)
Graphics - 8 : drawings are great~ might be a little rough here and there but its still good (like another guy said.. go for higher frame rate because things aren't moving as smooth as they should)
Style - 10 : good hand drawn stuff, i would believe it took you quite a while
Sounf - 7 : good choice of music, wasn't distracting and went well with the movie.. but againg.. i droppd a point on this because of aforementioned cut off thing
violence/interactivity/humor : wasn't intended.. therefore doesn't count
doesn't really do the job
In the flash you say you wanted to try and cool things down and get people to stop posting worthless shit about IWP. But showing Foamy wanting to take over NG (although he only dreams about it) and then gets a rock to the head from the people of NG as punishment does not work towards that purpose. It feels more like another flash against the guy, unless I'm completely missing this "implicit message" (which is likely.. since its 3 in the morning)
graphics - 6 : pretty good, would have been higher except foamy wasn't you original character
style - 4 : not bad, but again nothing original (would have been higer since your style is similar to mine.. with the detached hands and using Century Gothic. But the hands positions were a little wonky.. and you screwed up by switching to Arial in the "[???] (Unknown Artist)" line. might have bothered me less if you had switched to Helvetica instead of Arial.. but still, consistency is good.. stick to Century Gothic if you're gonna use that.)
sound -10 : you used beethovan virus my favourite song from DDR.. automatic 10
violence - 3 : rock to the head isn't all that violent anymore in the world of flash
interactivity - 0 : wasn't meant to be interactive so this doesn't count
humor - 3 : a minor giggle with the rock but nothing special
averages to 5 on the overall but dropping to 4 because again i don't see how this achieves your stated purpose.. (i'll vote it high if you manage to explain to me how it does though)
There were neither Century Gothic nor Helvetica fonts. I used Arial and another font whose name I don't remember. Graphic designer.. so that explains it. I happen to be in Multimedia right now, I know there are rules about fonts, but I surely wasn't expecting this kind of comment from a NG user.
I'm against excessive use of violence in Flash movies. So yeah. No explosions or mutilations.
This is experimental Flash. It's what I do on this alt. I learn from my mistakes, so I must thank you for your honest review.
nice clay work
i've done some claymation once.. it wasn't easy
the whole thing wasn't too exciting but considering the restrictions you had i doubt i could have thought of something better. The morphing of the clay was smooth and it went well with the music.. so overall good job.
difficulty curve needs adjustment
The first level was pretty easy.. but theres a huge jump to second, and to third too. I think you could make the curve a little smoother
(btw.. has anyone actually beaten the 3rd one? i tried.. but its like.. too hard)
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